I am learning to write a piece of prose- a sketch with detailed words, about a particular place, that is very important to me
I know I have achieved this when I can describe this sketch of the place,in specific detail. To do this I need to:
- Use specific nouns
- Activate the nouns with strong verbs
The Garden
The aroma of the flowers emerging from the ground filling my, nose with joy. In the back corner of the yard, the golden sun was glistening off the glass house. All around me are fruit trees with their branches careening and bushes trembling in the wind. In the middle of the yard/garden I have a prodigious view of the farm and nature around me. Birds are warbling continuously to each other, bees were embarking on to their next flower, clovers are overpopulating the grass and tomatoes are busily ripening in the glass house.
My dog scampering happily under the close eye of the summer sun - the most beautiful sight of all.
