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Monday, 19 June 2017

100 Word Challenge Week 8

This weeks prompt was a photo that we had to tell a story about. The photo had a cream egg that was cracked and had some cream running out and builders that were surrounding
the egg. This week my goal was to use more interesting words.


As the creamy substance flowed out of its chocolate shell we panicked not knowing what to do. I peered around to see what I could use to stop the flowing. A couple of meters away I spotted a plank of wood that could possibly do the job. The puddle of the creamy substance was now ankle deep. Everyone pitched in to help drag the plank of wood over to the giant egg. I don't know how it happened but when we put the plank in place the shell started to crack. All of a sudden the cream came flowing out.

1 comment:

  1. Hi,

    Wow your story made me feel like I was really there with the detail on that was wow. To be honest I think that is the best 100 word challenge I had ever seen! I am really looking forward to the next blog post.

    From Mika (Me Ka)

    Yaldhurst Model School

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.