The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas Memoir Poem
Today I had to write a memoir poem using adjectives, nouns and verbs. This memoir poem is set when Bruno got to his new house and what he can see. I hope you enjoy this poem.
The new house was horrible enough, there was only three floors, a cramped backyard and a tiny boys room.
An overpaid maid was sorting my clothes, a group of languid Jews were trudging behind a barb wire fence and uniformed soldiers were marching behind the Jews.
Serious Hitler was speaking down stairs, grumpy Gretel was arranging her dolls again and irritated Lieutenant Kotler was stuttering.
Frightened, Upset, Clueless, doing nothing important while hoping to return to Berlin.
Excellent poem Megan! Good use of WOW words :)
ReplyDeleteHi Megan
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you use an Adjective, Noun, Verb plan to reflect the scene and situation you found yourself in as one of the characters in your novel. Please repost the description to explain exactly what you had to do
Hi Megan
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your Memoir Poem. It is very descriptive and it is easy to understand.
Khali
Yr 6
Drummond Primary School
Hi Megan
ReplyDeleteThanks for making the changes
Your poem really makes me want to read this book, good job
Hello Megan
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School
I really liked your poem it is the best poem I have seen
well done