I am learning to write a memoir poem. (This recalls a moment in time from my past that links to an emotion I felt at that time) The emotion I have chosen to link my memoir to is wonder.
In my memoir I describe the scene and situation using strong adjective, nouns and verbs.
I hope you enjoy it.
The bedroom was stuffy enough.
My sisters were whispering privately to each other, newly opened presents were sitting in front of me and I could hear laughter down the hall.
The sweltering sun was shining through my dull grey curtains, charming birds were happily singing from the highest trees and the maroon pencil was tapping briskly between my fingers.
Our boisterous dogs were barking loudly, my overjoyed mum was ranting on about something I couldn't quite hear and my over-worked brain was exploring for different present options.
Agitated, Excited, Wondering.
What could possibly be the most perfect present?
Absolutely love this piece of writing Megan! Love all the strong words you put into this piece.You have a gifted talent in writing. Your perfect present would be a library full of books😁
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ReplyDeleteGood job really interesting words. Why did you write about this?
Danni
Room 4
Drummond primary school
Hi Megan,
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing. I like how you added some feelings.
What was your favourite part of writing this?
Laura,
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Megan, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School. Your poem sounds really cool and I saw that it's your third one so now I want to see your first and second.
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